It was gone like a puff of smoke, the kind that happens after you set off a confetti gun.
It was there for a moment, smelling of burnt plastic and old memories and then just like that it didn’t exist anymore.
It left traces on my fingers, and I could still smell it, it lingered there even when I tried to scrub it off.
Love seeps into your skin.
They don’t tell you that, nobody tells you that. Everyone talks about hearts and eyes and broken things, but they don’t tell you about skin.
They don’t tell you that you’ll want to claw it off because all touch reminds you of their touch. They don’t say that hands will remind you of his hands.
You and I were like the pop of the gun, bursting forward, everything rushing out and full of colour. We let it rain down on us, let it swallow us whole.
And the pieces?
They melted over us and spread out in a hundred directions and then all we had was paper on the floor. All we had was the aftermath of a beautiful explosion, all we had was a cloud of smoke.
“Cloud of smoke”..
You are splendid in your words dear one!
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thank you :)
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Stunning as always!
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Beautiful! You have such a way with words, truly talented
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thank you :)
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Beautiful!
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Beautiful put. Short sharp and sweet of bitter reality.
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I’m kind of spellbound after reading this. I don’t know why..
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Wow! Yes. I’ve also had the yearning for a simple touch of a hand. Puff! You spread this out very nicely!
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Very nice indeed!
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As everyone else here said, this is beautifully written. I’m always impressed by how much impact a short piece like this can have if written well. =)
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Lovely imagery!
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I can relate to that exact feeling… Thinking of everything we’ve been through compared to now. That cloud of smoke is suffocating, corrupting what we once had. Love your post.
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thank you :)
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So beautiful…!
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Very poetic and evocative!
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This is beautiful….Every word is like a thunder in the sky and leaving me like a raindrop into the river. I feel a part of it.
Thank you for sharing …
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Wow, thank you for such a beautiful comment <3
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<3
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I read it, and I read it again. Such a powerful piece in such a short stretch. Very good job!
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Thank you :)
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As always, lovely! Your deeply felt words continue to impress me. :-)
–Michael
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First, “They don’t tell you that, nobody tells you that.” is a damn good line if you meant it the way I read it.
Second, I really enjoy your blog. I’ve been here for a while now.
Third, We have the same layout. It’s dope.
and Fourth, you are absolutely positively beautiful
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Thank you, on all counts ;)
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Truly beautiful. I feel so aesthetically inspired right now haha
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awesome
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Your writing is so beautifully vivid and mesmerizing. Thank you for sharing! Wonderfully crafted…
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thanks so much miriam! glad you enjoyed it :)
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