She had a first class ticket
She found it in the gutter
She heard there was a place on earth
Was unlike any other
She had old conversations
She wrote them in a book
From time to time she’d rewind
The old words that she spoke
She had one place she wanted to be
Gave up on love at age twenty three
A big white sign she got off the train
Nobody saw her ever again
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A Short Conversation 
I’ve seen her!
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I don’t know why, perhaps it’s my sense of drama, but I find the ending chilling in its uncertainty. I read too many James Elroy novels, I think. But the 50 word format allows you to do that and you’ve done it so well in ‘She Found it In’.
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thanks so much Dermott, glad you enjoyed it :)
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Beautiful. Reading it aloud creates a singsong everyone wants to hear.
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thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it :)
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Awesome! Great job!!!
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Love the open ended ending
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thank you :)
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Well done and makes me want to know more of the story.
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Great article but it didn’t have evenrthiyg-I didn’t find the kitchen sink!
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Your words are so beautiful.
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thank you :)
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Wonderful!
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Thank you :)
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beautiful👌👌
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Thanks so much!
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There are so many ways to “travel” through that piece of writing. Smartly put. I like great endings, and that’s a great ending.
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Thank you sha’tara, and thanks for always leaving such great comments I really enjoy reading them :)
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Beautifully done!
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thank you :)
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